Hero Slayer (revised)

[JSwift]

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOO!!!!!!!!!!!

[PLayersdie]

double release day

Chapter Eleven: Things are Changing

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*The being pulled out a bow and shot off a arrow that was huge and made of flames. The arrow traveled at extremely high speeds and Ankoku barely had enough time to move and was hit in his right side creating a large hole. Ankoku let out a blood curdling scream as he grabbed where he was hit. Blood was starting to cover the floor. The being took a step forward and spoke to Ankoku; it had two voices speaking at once “I am Ventra the being of justice. I will now purge you of this land.” *The voices that came form it were both Ginta’s and Banta’s. “Gods come forth, Hanzo god of fire and Intra god of wind.” On Ventra’s right appeared a huge dragon of flame and on his left a giant wolf of wind. The two gods charged at Ankoku. He used a wave of water to slow down Hanzo but it didn’t affect Intra. Intra came down on Ankoku with its fangs. All Ankoku could do was grab onto the huge wolfs fangs and try to keep it from prying down onto him. Then Hanzo came back and slashed with its claws at him nicking his chest. Ankoku ended up flying back and dropping his gauntlets. His chest had been burned by the claws from Hanzo. *

“I will never die.” Ankoku Stood there and summoned his element “God of water flood them, Sentra!” A giant tortoise appeared in front of Ankoku and charged into Hanzo. The two collided and disappeared “That’s it for those two. A full body summoning of a god can only be done once by each person a day.” The sword liquefies and comes back to Ankoku. He recreated his sword and imbued it with evil energy from his body. He charged at Intra as it opened its mouth he thrusts forward threw its mouth and kills the god. “Now with that gone all I’m left with is you.” *

Ankoku raced at Ventra now changing his gauntlets into twin blades. His wound was pouring out blood as Ventra took its blades, one of fire and one of air. The two collided and their blades started to fly every where sparks and flames going every where. The two stood stale mate for several minuets till suddenly Ankoku saw his opportunity and blasted both of Ventra’s blades into the air. With Ventra’s hands and blades in the air he created a deep gash in his stomach by cutting into him with both blades. The gash opened and air started to pour out sending Ankoku flying back into the wall. Ankoku put both his feet on the wall and jumped off flying at Ventra. He changed his blades into a drill and spun into Ventra’s chest boring a huge hole and forcing the two to separate. The two were sitting flopped over on there knees against a wall. The two were heavily damaged.* Ankoku walked over there holding onto his side with his one arm and with the other he held onto his sword. “I actually was a bit afraid there for a second but I guess it was all for nothing.” *

Banta with the last bit of energy he had pulled out his black and white arrows and released them into Ankokus body. The two stuck in there and he let out a scream as a energy flowed threw him that shocked him badly “What did you just do to me you little *.” *

Banta looked up and laughed while blood flowed from his mouth “I’ve cursed you to never become stronger then you are at this moment. Those were sealing arrows.” *

“I don’t care you’ll still die here now.” He walked up to him and stabbed Banta in the face. His blade went threw his eye and out the back of his head. Ankoku pulled the blade out and Banta’s dead body flopped onto the ground blood flowing out the hole in his head. *

Ginta’s eyes got huge as tears started to form “BROTHER!” Power started to surge threw Ginta’s body as he stood up and brandished his swords. “You killed my brother, so even if I die I’ll make sure you die.” He then charged at Ankoku . Ankoku made another blade and started to defend himself from the on coming Ginta. He was moving faster and his swings were getting stronger. *

“How is this possible, you were on the verge of death?” Ankoku was doing the best he could not to get cut to ribbons but was still taking blows on his arms and hands. The two fought for what seemed like hours giving blows back and forth. Eventually the two stood a good ways away from each other bloody and tired. This next attack would be their last; the two rushed at each other and collided once more. Ankoku swung his blades downward at Ginta and he blocked it. The two were locked against each other when Ankoku pushed his blade downward far enough to get below Ginta’s neck. Once he did he smiled as he changed the blades into a long spear. The spear went threw Ginta’s throat and out the back of his head. As he was dying he jammed both his blades into Ankoku’s chest. This was the last thing he would ever do as his body went limp. Ankoku changed the spear back into a sword and dropped Ginta’s dead body to the floor in a pool of blood. A hole opened up in the wall of the maze and Ankoku limped out of it, when he was fully out it crumbled to the ground. Densetsu came to Ankoku. *

“Lord Ankoku!” *

Ankoku fell to the ground at Densetsu’s feet “I won.” He said while coughing up blood. *

Densetsu started to heal Ankokus wounds as he fell unconscious.

[narutorules25]

YEY! i wanted him to win cause he is the best yey! good job with chapter 11 ^_^

[PLayersdie]

dude es always gonna win cause hes the main charachter and its called hero slayer for a reason.

[JSwift]

Another great chapter! Itd be cool if this was a movie-all gory and bloody!

[narutorules25]

but not always the main character wins like NAruto vs. SAsuke at the final valley.... ive read books that the main character dies. not kidding and it* migth be because its part of the plot.

[HeroAiyami]

interesting process I must say this is epic.

[PLayersdie]

well all I know is that I am going with the opposite view then anything ive ever seen. Its the bad guy wining and his life not that oif the heros,

[PLayersdie]

((bump))

[arronhyuga]

here P.D.(players die, not player side lol, i never knew that)

ill do the BUMPING for you today since i loved the story so much,

Chapter 12 better ocme soon